My second...(re-mixed)

[iMacCartney]

Hi.

This is one of my first production that I have made in early 00's (or ever ) with Logic 3. I imported audio files to Logic 9 and then began a tough job as there were more than 80 audio files/region and had to find the original positions for all of those(thanks David + other guys for the advices), had to re-record some instruments as those files were missing or corrupted. The arrangement and everything else is just as they were when recorded more than 10 years ago. There were a lot of level changes in these audio files so it made mixing veeeeeery difficult. This song doesn't actually represent the music style that I have made but.....well, hope you'll enjoy and give me some feedback, thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/x1y1/wish-you-were-here

Edit 010113; the new mix of the song can be found here

https://soundcloud.com/x1y1/wish-you-were-here-remixed

[Rev. Juda$ Sleaze]

Smooth!

Very nicely produced too.

[iMacCartney]

Smooth!

Very nicely produced too.

Thank You. Hope no-one will fall asleep while listening that.

[Rev. Juda$ Sleaze]

I don't think that will... be... um... will be... ZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz

Seriously though, cool chord sequence and vocals, it in no way sent me to sleep! Again, I got the Toto vibe!

[iMacCartney]

I don't think that will... be... um... will be... ZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz

Seriously though, cool chord sequence and vocals, it in no way sent me to sleep! Again, I got the Toto vibe!

It was tough Job to remix this whil....Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........

[Rev. Juda$ Sleaze]

[camillo jr]

Really nice chord progression! And that four against three rhythm thing you've got going there is pretty cool.

[iMacCartney]

Really nice chord progression! And that four against three rhythm thing you've got going there is pretty cool.

Thank you Camillo jr. I really appreciate your feedback.

[iMacCartney]

I don't think that will... be... um... will be... ZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz

Seriously though, cool chord sequence and vocals, it in no way sent me to sleep! Again, I got the Toto vibe!

May I ask where did you get that Toto vibe? ( I can't hear/feel it )

[Rev. Juda$ Sleaze]

May I ask where did you get that Toto vibe? ( I can't hear/feel it )

Wait, you're right, not Toto, it's another song from the 80s... Bah! It's on the tip of my brain... It will come to me

[kingstonmike]

Chord progression and vocals remind me of Thomas Dolby (who I like a lot).
My only comment is that the arrangement is thick all of the time, and maybe could use a thinner texture at some point.

[iMacCartney]

Chord progression and vocals remind me of Thomas Dolby (who I like a lot).
My only comment is that the arrangement is thick all of the time, and maybe could use a thinner texture at some point.

Thank you kingstonmike. I agree with you, it's too thick - especially in chorus and in the end. I realised that too when mixing but didn't want to make big changes as this was the my old production from early 00's so I just wanted to keep it like it was

[iMacCartney]

Hi, I just made a new mix of this "old" song. I wanted it to be more open, smoother and less compressed. I'd appreciate any kind of feedback, thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/x1y1/wish-you-were-here-remixed