ViolaGhost wrote:You've got really great stuff here. I mean, really really good However, as others have mentioned - you repeat the main motif way too many times. Why not play around more harmonically? At 1:34, you break away into a really great motif. Keep that going into your B section! I come from a classical background, so I tend to think about form with my pieces. While chillout can often be minimalistic, I think you have some great melodies happening, and wouldn't be afraid to clearly outline your form with them and go from there. One idea with the arpeggios is to just break them up, or to remove notes. It gives it simple but effective variation. Here:
All in all, this track is booming with really great ideas. Keep it up, I can't wat to hear more!
rainstick wrote:for me the pads are a bit trancy and the piano a bit up front and pokey.... it could be nice to maybe filter the pads down a bit, change the piano so some kind of slowly modulating synth or something... kind of feels like some kind of trance break.... im not really mad on trance though, so maybe i should say less!
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