clintoncole wrote:I think it could use a little more reverb on the vocals, and slight bit of pitch correction! Overall it's really nice though, I like it !
qvr wrote:Nice song. Just focusing on the structure and recording as you mentioned you will do more mixing later. I would make the intro shorter and start the guitar without any fade-ins. Check out the guitar recording at the 1:00 mark and maybe re-record it as it sounds weird.
qvr wrote:No it was just the guitar chords used at the one minute mark.
DaveyBee wrote:the positives - great song, excellent voice (you lucky sod).
the suggestions i have - i'm really not going for the synth parts you added. i think you were going for extra vitality or something in the choruses - something to set them apart and bring it all up a notch? - but the synth part seems incongruent to the rest of the song, almost too poppy.
The guitars aren't really coming to life enough for me either. the one in the right channel is a little soft and muddy.
The intro is a little long i think - i can see where you heading with it, letting the intro build slowly so that when the kick comes in we're rocking with you - but i'd almost be inclined to start at that point and play around with the other instruments more.
I hope i dont sound overly critical, it is a great wee song, but i also think the best thing about this forum is getting entirely impartial feedback.
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