I didn't get any feedback, so I can only assume that it was perfect and no suggestions could be offered. Or maybe people think "if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything." Either way I'm just going to leave mine as is for Lagerfeldt's critique.
This was a great learning experience; in one aspect just to see how the tracks were laid down with their timbre/frequency position thought out before the mixing stage. When I first loaded the song my first impression was that this song almost mixes itself.
Another great learning aspect was to hear how everyone had their own unique methods of treating the material - and I'm not thinking of the fancy touches everyone did, just the way the foundation was set.
Thanks to David & Fader8 for hosting, bandwidth, and organization, and special thanks to Lagerfeldt for the song and final critique.
iMac 3.06 Intel dual core, 8 Gigs of bytes RAM, OS 10.6.8, Logic 9.1.5