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Hiphop hard banger - feedback appreciated


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I agree. The recording of the lead vocal is very clean and sparkling, and all of the sounds and instruments in the non-chorus sections are well-separated. The verse sections are "remarkably clean and good."

 

But, when you go for the chorus, things begin to "clash," both with the vocal and with each other. They're all sitting in the same frequency ranges, and their respective rhythms are suddenly jumbled. What you have in the chorus right now seems – well – "noisy." No longer coherent. It just doesn't "fit."

 

So, I would suggest very specifically that you "clean up" (just) the chorus section: I think you're trying too hard. We ought to feel that new, different, and exciting ideas have been added, yet are "still compatible with" the verse. "Less is more."

Mike Robinson - "I wanna quit being a computer consultant and become a composer and arranger at age fifty-nevermind."
Logic Pro X, MacBook Pro, 88-key MIDI controller.

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Yeah, to my ears the "clash" causes the song to lose momentum. It's a mash-up right now. But fortunately should be an easy fix.

Mike Robinson - "I wanna quit being a computer consultant and become a composer and arranger at age fifty-nevermind."
Logic Pro X, MacBook Pro, 88-key MIDI controller.

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