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HeliusAlpha

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Good job. I like it. Is this intended/written as a movie que?

 

I like the space you created, as well as the panning on the beds. The only comment I would have, is that the kick felt a little naked and too up front in the ending crescendo. Stuck out a little too much for my taste. Then again, that's just my opinion, I could be wrong. 8)

 

Oh, and the book would be Greg Bear's "Moving Mars", but I must confess that I had to google that one. :)

 

Take care.

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Thank you! :) and yes the idea is a movie que/cut scene in game idea. I agree about the kick at the end, I think I over did it when i was doing the crescendo, got a little over excited with dynamics :)

And yes it is Greg Bear's "Moving Mars" ahh the wonders of Google...

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