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Masoomi

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Beautiful as far as melody is concerned. Really liked the uniqueness of it UNTIL the drums kicked in and the whole vibe changed. The drums sound too dry, artificial. They stand out from the rest of the mix as if stylistically they didn't belong in the ambience of the song.

 

It was just too messy, all over the place at the end. There's a missing sense of coherence in the last part.

 

I did like the beginning though, A LOT. Very moving, soothing, and overall powerful in a unique type of way.

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Beautiful as far as melody is concerned. Really liked the uniqueness of it UNTIL the drums kicked in and the whole vibe changed. The drums sound too dry, artificial. They stand out from the rest of the mix as if stylistically they didn't belong in the ambience of the song.

 

It was just too messy, all over the place at the end. There's a missing sense of coherence in the last part.

 

I did like the beginning though, A LOT. Very moving, soothing, and overall powerful in a unique type of way.

thank you! yes I agree

and I'm working on it...slowly!

the second part is about invasion and destruction.... so the vibe change was intentional. but perhaps I did it harshly and badly and as u said my drums sound out-of-place ...

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