Absorbalov Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 Hi All I thought i would just put this up, its all me , Logic and a little bit of help from Ableton Live. Im still learning, but im quite pleased with it Cheers Rob http://soundcloud.com/rubbertoe/messed-it-up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absorbalov Posted November 22, 2010 Author Share Posted November 22, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpotle Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 cool song man - nice voice. Did you use nashville tuning for that arpeggiated guitar? Because to me, listening through headphones, it sound very bright. And my only thought is it kinda didnt sit in the mix. But thats just one interweb guys opinion. All and all, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clintoncole Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 sounds good to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absorbalov Posted November 23, 2010 Author Share Posted November 23, 2010 Thanks for the comments guys, it seems i have a very scratchy acoustic still on there from the original idea that i had, really low in the mix, but nonetheless still there, when it shouldn't have been, ill get that removed!!! btw nice stuff on your soundcloud chimpotle, ive only got crappy speakers at work so ill have a proper listen later at home and post comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GStepper Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 Sounds good to me too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilpanic Posted January 2, 2011 Share Posted January 2, 2011 Nice track is that you on vocals? sounds great. a few things... Maybe kill a few of the darlings? There are alot of things going on and just trimming things down would make the track stronger, me thinks. Like for instance the space bleeps and stuff. they sound good but the track have enough going for it as is. Maybe the vocal effects halfway in can also be toned down. Gr8 track! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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