Feedback? Electronic/Techno Production

[ROYALEFATALE]

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/sagas/work-in-progress-ii[/soundcloud]

 

anything to work on as far as the mix goes?

[m.bot]

Bassline?

[rhys]

I actually really like it because it sounds a lot like some of the very early British techno like kosmic and DJ Lomas, I'm talking like 1992 in the days of altern8 and do you remember "I'm the one and only dominator" and a track called the bouncer - kicks like a mule " your names not down your not coming in" classic .... Well yeah if all that is alien to you then I'm getting old lol but I hope you get the gist