5c077ie Posted September 5, 2012 Share Posted September 5, 2012 [soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/hyperionuk/tkrz-wip[/soundcloud] Sorry you guys, i uploaded this yesterday but like the idiot i am i forgot to embed the soundcloud link Feel free to comment , follow me on soundcloud too, thats awesome. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rhys Posted September 5, 2012 Share Posted September 5, 2012 I don't know why you didn't just edit your other post tho, absentro!!! all the way One thing I noticed is that the melody up to 1.00 seems a little disjointed from the melody in the break, I would personally monopolise on the spooky vibe you got going in the break and make that the theme of the track. As with all tracks tho man this stuff is subjective so don't take what I say too seriously, just an idea thats all I Cant comment on production as I'm listening on little ear buds right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
5c077ie Posted September 5, 2012 Author Share Posted September 5, 2012 Cheers buddy. I pretty new to forums, it wasnt the first thing that crossed my mind to edit it. Keep it in mind for the when i next do something stupid in a post haha. Cheers, yeah i know what you mean, this was uploaded a few days ago, ive changed that part now for the exact reason that you mentioned. Ill have a full track up soon, so ill probably upload it here and edit this post too. Hopefully you'll like the finished piece. Cheers for taking the time to give me some feed back pal, all the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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