JonnyB187 Posted November 27, 2013 Share Posted November 27, 2013 Just completed my 2nd track - would love any constructive feedback on the song, production and anything else! Please be as brutal as you like so long as it's constructive https://soundcloud.com/jonnybrown-1/temper-temper-2-0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camillo jr Posted November 28, 2013 Share Posted November 28, 2013 I like that! The sounds are great and It's refreshing to hear something with a bit of a mixed meter feel in this genre. Two quibbles: At 3:00, there's a sound that comes on briefly - four or five beats max - and it sounds out of time to me. Maybe that was the intention but it kind of jarred me out of the rhythm there. And the ending sounds anticlimactic to me..... maybe return to one of the heavier elements from previously in the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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