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My Original Music (feedback appreciated)


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Hello Logic Pro Help community! Two years ago I began composing music and I would really appreciate some feedback on what I have done. It is all available here :http://travisproductions.org. I would greatly appreciate comments and criticism as to learn and make my music better. It would also be great if you could like my Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/travisbaarsofficial.

 

Thank you very much,

 

 

Travis

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Nice flow and balance in the parts, but I think the drums are throwing me off. Not sure if you've messed around with the dynamics in them or 'humanized' them but it doesn't sound like it, they sound flat. I also think that it would really help the flow of the piece if the drums were slowed down a lot. To me it sounds like the bass should be on the downbeat and the snare on beat 3, with maybe some variations where bass is on downbeat, and then snare on the next downbeat, for a really slowed down heavy back beat...and not the standard 'rock beat' that you have going in the piece. But that's just me :)
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