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'Untitled' Mix before Vocals - Please Critique. (Indie/Rock)


davebeans

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This is the latest track I've been working on, and first with Logic 8. It features electric guitar, electric bass, Ableton drums, and piano/string sounds from my Roland EP-4 digital piano.

 

I'm currently pretty happy with the mix, and generally get to this point before writing/recording vocals.

 

Please feel free to leave any feedback - it's not structured into a typical verse/chorus etc. setting, so please be aware I realize that :-) I find it to have a story style of setting, with an Intro, Verse, Chorus/Chorus thing happening.

 

 

I'm particularly sensitive to the drum sound - as in I've changed/tweaked it a million times despite it being minimal and simple.

 

Thanks - first music post on Logic forums.

 

http://www.davebeans.com/saturday.mp3

 

 

 

P.S. I'm not sure what Indie means as a genre, but have been categorized as such lately.

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Hi, mate

 

I think it's a lovely track. Well done. I would say that the drum sound is just perfect but if I were you I might consider puting a very simple hi hat part to go along with the snare...just keeping the beat perhaps. Obviously its just down to taste. Hope it helps.

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