Shahram Omidvar Posted May 13 Share Posted May 13 Hi Colleagues, Just wondering if you have got any suggestions for improvement on my work with the link below. Thanks in advance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fusbur Posted May 13 Share Posted May 13 Hi You should post this in the Music Showcase Forum! 1 Quote Logic X 10.6.3 - OS 10.15.7 Catalina - Late 2012 Mac Mini 2.3Ghz i7 Quad, 16Gb RAM - 1TB 5400rpm SATA HD, 4TB 7200rpm external HD with Thunderbolt & USB 3.0 Focusrite Scarlett 2i2, Line 6 UX2 - Adam A5x monitors - Komplete 10 Ultimate, Amplitube Max, Pod Farm 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahram Omidvar Posted May 13 Author Share Posted May 13 Thanks fusbur. I am new to this Forum. Is it too much trouble to help me how to do that, please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
des99 Posted May 13 Share Posted May 13 I already moved the thread to the correct forum for you. 👍 1 Quote mu:zines | music magazine archive | difficultAudio | Legacy Logic Project Conversion | Logic 10.7.4, MBP 16" M1pro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
markno999 Posted May 13 Share Posted May 13 Shahram, You have a nice track, if you are looking for advice to improve it I would suggest you need some articulation/Expression/Volume controls. Tango is a very dynamic style, builds up and goes back down, you have a lot of the punctuation of Tango included but some work on the articulations might get you down the road further. Also, would suggest changing up instrument styles in parts, ex.. you have that violin motif line at the beginning that goes throughout.... try changing that up to Pizz Strings in spots and see how that plays. You have a nice track here, just a bit more programming will take it over the finish line. Regards Quote Logic Pro X 10.7.3 | OS X 12.2.1| MacBook Pro 16-inch 2021 | Apple M1 Pro | 16GB RAM | 2TB SSD hard drive | 2TB Lacie Thunderbolt External SSD HD | Apollo Quad Audio Interface | Apollo Twin Audio Interface Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahram Omidvar Posted May 14 Author Share Posted May 14 Wonderful. Thanks for your feedback, Mark. I will follow them and see how I go. Can you share some of your works with me, if possible. Thanks again, Shahram Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahram Omidvar Posted May 14 Author Share Posted May 14 In light of your comments above, I did apply some focused and more articulation on something which I was working on. This is the song the "Baby Shark" which I was imagining what it would look like when it grows! Here is the product. Please let me know what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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