Suggestions for improvement (Tango)

[Shahram Omidvar]

Hi Colleagues,

Just wondering if you have got any suggestions for improvement on my work with the link below. Thanks in advance.

 

[fusbur]

Hi

You should post this in the Music Showcase Forum!

[Shahram Omidvar]

Thanks fusbur. I am new to this Forum. Is it too much trouble to help me how to do that, please.

[des99]

I already moved the thread to the correct forum for you. 👍

[markno999]

Shahram,

You have a nice track, if you are looking for advice to improve it I would suggest you need some articulation/Expression/Volume controls.   Tango is a very dynamic style, builds up and goes back down, you have a lot of the punctuation of Tango included but some work on the articulations might get you down the road further.    Also, would suggest changing up instrument styles in parts, ex..  you have that violin motif line at the beginning that goes throughout.... try changing that up to Pizz Strings in spots and see how that plays.    You have a nice track here, just a bit more programming will take it over the finish line.

Regards

[Shahram Omidvar]

Wonderful. Thanks for your feedback, Mark. I will follow them and see how I go.

Can you share some of your works with me, if possible.

Thanks again,

Shahram

[Shahram Omidvar]

In light of your comments above, I did apply some focused and more articulation on something which I was working on. This is the song the "Baby Shark" which I was imagining what it would look like when it grows! Here is the product. Please let me know what you think.