munmun Posted December 9, 2007 Share Posted December 9, 2007 Other than the title being a bit of a mouthful- would love some critique of my mix and the song in general. This is the ending track to a podcast story I am writing which explains the hubris laden ending. Paradise is in the hearts of the one you love @ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=405294 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mostlyzoso Posted December 9, 2007 Share Posted December 9, 2007 Nice work. I'd up the tempo just a tad and I think you should put a bit more swing into your kick drum. you only have 2 hits per measure (i think). I would spice it up a bit and add more kick hits..if that makes sense. I would also bring your acoustic guitar up a bit. Its getting lost in the drum beat which isnt as interesting as your guitar. Third, you should think about layering your vocals to thicken them up a bit, everyone does it. Maybe a harmony part for your "After life has ended" section. Good song though. Nice Beatles feel! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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